Matthew’s drama analysis
Wednesday June 06th 2007, 1:21 am
Filed under: Uncategorized
Filed under: Uncategorized
Hi my name is Matthew and I’m in yr6. I go to Plenty Parklands Primary School and in drama today the 6/6/07 I did a play about bullying a nerd or a smaller person than you. The other students in my group are Marko the bully, Lauren the bully, Mitchell and I are the Nerds and Stephaine the teacher. In the act Mitchell and I were bullied by Marko and Lauren. In the play we had to make a decision to tell the teacher about the bullying situation. The bullies get in trouble and we become friends with the bullies. We improved on talking louder and our OFI [opportunity for improvement] is to make sure we are not facing our backs to the audience. Please reply from Matthew
PS. My drama teacher Mrs Bryne is the best.
Hi Matthew,
Comment by Alison 06.21.07 @ 12:45 amnice post - I love your OFI term - must adopt that myself. They’re good points too - I’m doing a play at the moment and I’m still not talking loud enough. It always sounds ridiculously loud to me, but the old folks in the audience can’t hear me! No point saying it if it doesn’t get heard… Keep at it.
Leave a comment
Line and paragraph breaks automatic, e-mail address never displayed, HTML allowed:
<a href="" title=""> <abbr title=""> <acronym title=""> <b> <blockquote cite=""> <code> <em> <i> <strike> <strong>